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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Looking for weekly assignment advice...again.


Weekly assignment is zipper and was wondering if any of these photos are contenders. Trying something a little different and not giving complete attention to the zipper, mostly because I'm without a macro lens, lol. If one is composed well, is there any adjustments I should make?

Got to love my son for his patience!

Thanks!


























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Feb 03, 2014 at 11:53 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Looking for weekly assignment advice...again.


One more







Feb 03, 2014 at 11:54 PM
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First one draws the eye sufficiently that even without a macro, you can pull us to it a bit ... might play with different crops a bit.

Second one looks a tad contrived, and a bit cyanic cast, but I kinda like it better.

The rest ... pass for me.



Feb 04, 2014 at 06:18 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Looking for weekly assignment advice...again.


Thanks Rusty! They actually all feel a tad contrived to me, lol. I am happy, however, that he was somewhat willing to help.

I'm trying to figure out a good crop for the first one without taking away from the "draw". I'll also adjust the colors on the second one to correct it, I see what you mean about that. I thought he looked kinda like a "diehard fan" in the second pic.

Again, thanks for the advice! Every bit helps a beginner like me!



Feb 04, 2014 at 06:33 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Looking for weekly assignment advice...again.


2nd is my favorite


Feb 04, 2014 at 02:52 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Looking for weekly assignment advice...again.


Here's what I changed my submission to, anything you guys can add to this. My monitor may not be perfect, but part of me thinks the colors are a little off.







Feb 04, 2014 at 08:00 PM





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