I'm not loving all of the stuff in the air and the crop seems a little too 1/2 and 1/2 instead of 1/3. Overall, I like the shot though, it's a nice capture and I'm sure the family will like it.
I really like this one Jeremy! I want to like the rail on the right but it keeps pulling my attention from the family. Can you pull down that bright area a bit (or a lot)?