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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


Spent a little time with Kyna Lian up at Twin Arrows in Northern Az a little while ago and wanted to share what I thought was best!
Thanks for looking!

















Jan 23, 2014 at 05:39 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


Really like photos 1 and 3. 2 seems a little too contrived. Prefer the model sans wig.

Do you have any shots with the model closer to the camera? Would like to see some of those.

Very pretty model. Nice location, and nice light you shot in.



Jan 23, 2014 at 06:00 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


The poses all look too contrived to me, and there's too much foreground in front of her and too much sky above.

<Chas>



Jan 23, 2014 at 07:11 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


I'm not a portrait photographer but I find the text on the background buildings distracting. My eye wanders to the background more than to the subject.

Just my two cents.
keith



Jan 23, 2014 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


The first thought that came to mind is: "tacky"


Jan 23, 2014 at 11:19 PM
 



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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


Ha, tough crowd. These are all pretty good. I like #3 the best. Maybe try a longer focal length? 135-200?


Jan 24, 2014 at 12:05 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


A tough crowd indeed....I like #3 best. The foreground is quite interesting and lighting is very nice.


Jan 24, 2014 at 07:12 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


Wow, what a great location! Great model, looks like that was a lot of fun!



Jan 26, 2014 at 02:29 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Twin Arrows with Kyna


Thank you all for your feedback. I'm always happy to get any kind of reaction from my photos! I understand and take your critiques into consideration. That said, if I had a wider lens I would have thrown a lot more of the Universe in there.

I feel the wolves are hungry- it's feeding time! As per your request, here's two more for your viewing pleasure. I found two closer shots with the least amount of distractions to help those of you with ADHD eye balls from wandering.

Good times,

Tim












Jan 27, 2014 at 04:26 PM





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