p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.
I like the goal. Admirable.
I like the bowl.
I like the simplicity.
I find the brightness associated with the blinds and especially the light to the right of the blinds strongly pulls my eye away and disrupts the quiet mood and the simple lines. The blue/green triangular shape along the the edge of the blinds is distracting, as is the thin bluish sliver upper left.
I'd like to see this with other variations. I think there is alot of potential.
p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.
Indeed the business of the blinds is annoying and somewhat off message, although it does provide the obvious light source - the illumination. I've cut it back quite a bit, but I'm still not content with it.
p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.
I agree with Barbara.
And in the last version you still have a spill of light appealing falling on the top of the molding. I would like to see a sepai version of this one.
Scott