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Archive 2014 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.

  
 
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Another attempt to find meaning in the ordinary:







Jan 22, 2014 at 10:13 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


I like the goal. Admirable.
I like the bowl.
I like the simplicity.
I find the brightness associated with the blinds and especially the light to the right of the blinds strongly pulls my eye away and disrupts the quiet mood and the simple lines. The blue/green triangular shape along the the edge of the blinds is distracting, as is the thin bluish sliver upper left.
I'd like to see this with other variations. I think there is alot of potential.

Scott



Jan 23, 2014 at 09:10 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


Indeed the business of the blinds is annoying and somewhat off message, although it does provide the obvious light source - the illumination. I've cut it back quite a bit, but I'm still not content with it.


Jan 23, 2014 at 11:34 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


Or, perhaps a sepia version?







Jan 25, 2014 at 12:20 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


Or a couple of neutral monos:












Jan 25, 2014 at 05:39 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


Personally like the sepia toned version and the last version posted. The tight crop removes the bright light distraction.


Jan 25, 2014 at 09:27 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


I agree with Barbara.
And in the last version you still have a spill of light appealing falling on the top of the molding. I would like to see a sepai version of this one.
Scott



Jan 25, 2014 at 09:45 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


How about two sepia versions?





Medium Sepia







Deep Sepia




Jan 25, 2014 at 02:55 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


I'd go med dark sepia!


Jan 25, 2014 at 05:34 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


Too much drama in the deep?


Jan 25, 2014 at 05:40 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Reflection, translucency and illumination.


no, just a bit quieter to me with less saturation.
But hey, its a personal reaction, aesthetic choice, mood issue.
Scott



Jan 25, 2014 at 09:12 PM
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Sorry. Meant to include a wink emoticon on my previous reply.


Jan 25, 2014 at 09:43 PM
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