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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sydney


It's been a while since I've posted anything here, but I have been lurking... Thought I should get some stuff together to throw to the wolves.

Hopefully this round of shots with Sydney will go over better than the last round.

Thanks for looking and let the feeding frenzy begin!



























Jan 19, 2014 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sydney


Pretty young lady, interesting choices in colors......doesn't do anything for me....sorry.


Jan 19, 2014 at 05:37 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sydney


I think these are interesting and Herb is correct, she is pretty.

If you are looking for cc I can offer this:
1) I like it
2) I wish both eyes were in focus and the light was softer
3) I like it but I wish there was more separation from the background (back-lit on the hair?). Either way I still like it.
4) Her eyes are stunning. Love the clarity in her right eye (camera left). I find myself wishing there was a little more room above her head. Also my eyes keep wanting to go to the upper left corner from the highlights there/shadows there.
5) I mostly like this one but I think I can see your shadow in the reflection of her eyes. It's bothersome to me.

I hope you were looking for cc and not taking this as nitpicking because I'm not intending it as such.



Jan 19, 2014 at 05:56 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sydney


Ion I appreciate your cc.

1) me too.
2) Good tip, I didn't even think about both eyes being in focus.
3) That's why I love posting here, I always learn something new.
4) This was cropped maybe a little too much. I can always clean up the highlight in the corner.
5) Good eye!

Thanks for your feedback! :-)



Jan 19, 2014 at 06:59 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sydney


All good comments. I'd be interested in seeing these in b&w. One piece of advice about #1. Try not to let elbows lock forward. Maybe ask that she turns her hand or just ask her to unlock her elbow. Interesting posing. You're doing a great job.


Jan 19, 2014 at 10:21 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sydney


3 seems too contrived.

I really like #2. It has a boldness, intensity, and genuineness to it. FWIW



Jan 20, 2014 at 08:35 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sydney


I like all of them quite a bit, with the exception of 2.

I love the color selection, and I really like the streaks of different colors in the model's hair. Photo 5 really shows off the beautiful hair. I think I would like it more if she wasn't centered, though.

1 is my favorite, locked elbow and all. I like 3 quite a bit as well. Nice location for the shoot, and all are lit well.

Please post more of your work.



Jan 20, 2014 at 11:43 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Sydney


Thanks for taking the time for conveying your feelings on these shots. So many tiny details to focus on... I'm happy to hear they're at least lit well.

I'll post more threads soon!



Jan 20, 2014 at 01:30 PM





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