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Welcome! The following is meant to help make you and I better photographers and is offered in a friendly tone. It is simply one person's opinion, for what it's worth
Prior to taking each of these pictures, what decisions did you deliberately make regarding lighting, posing, composition, and exposure? Was there a vision you were trying to achieve? Or did you simply raise the camera and shoot what was there?
1. Interesting idea, but composition does not work for me. Should have kicked that brown pillow off the couch, it distracts. Kid's eyes towards the camera are strange.
2. Harsh lighting and very contrasty, which I think goes against the mood you are going for. Crookedness doesn't work for me. Splotches in the background are distracting.
3. I kind of like the crookedness in this one. The background really does not work for me, and the railing bisects the kid's head which is generally a no-no.
Keep shooting and you will get better! Photography is not a spectator sport. FWIW
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