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Tim Kuhn wrote:
As other have said Mitesh, nice low angle. I like the spotlight of dof on these it really does isolate the birds nicely. I agree with Morris on the first and the rework shows the where the focus lies, a bit up the beak rather than the eye of the bird. I also think the gbh shot composition is rather clumsy, kind of like it was rushed to get the bird to fit in the frame. That said I do like the fish in the air 2 & 3 are very well done. Over all a wonderful set
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Thanks, Tim. Appreciate the feedback on the GBH composition. For reference purposes, here is the original frame. I saw the GBH fishing along the opposite side of a small creek, down an embankment. I picked a spot in some tall brush and waited for it to approach. Couldn't change FL, and I felt like if I moved, I would have spooked him. All that said, if this was your shot, is there a different crop that you would have gone with, or in your opinion, does the original composition just not leave much to work with?
Original, uncropped
Cropped version that is posted in the OP (re-posted here to make it easier to compare)
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