Bob Jarman Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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I really enjoy the images, nice work panning and at 90mm you must have been on top of them.
That said, and I enjoy sports car racing - tried photographing races many years ago at Upper Marlboro, Summit Point, Watkins Glen, and Bridgehampton -I found it difficult to gain separation among groups of images - something to distinguish one image/car from another. Otherwise, we're left with pretty blurs of color that, for me quickly grow stale.
I think these would benefit from more length, allowing space for the car to drive into the frame (#2 & 3). Too , it appears as they are braking to enter a turn, so another broader environmental shot showing the corner (with cars entering) would help add context. Also a 3/4 front view to show some grill work would add perspective. Usually images with only horizontal lines lack any sense of tension or dynamics - in other words, static and lack visual interest.
Processing: bright, crisp, great focus and DOF, maybe a little on the hot side for some.
I'm envious of your having been there, and the weather Looks like a grand time
Regards,
Bob
Edited on Jan 08, 2014 at 07:59 PM · View previous versions
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