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RustyBug wrote:
Just right !!!
A carousel ... IS ... a cornucopia of busy.
The pole and horse might be a bit too sharp ... pulling from the priceless princess a bit. I also, might crop or reduce the contrast on the horse a bit as its mass also competes with her. The jacket forearm a little bit competing also (contrast/sharp).
The wind in her hair and eyes of amazement at all the activity are fitting to the busy sights and sounds of the timeless carousel. I'm not much of a snapshot fan of other people's family, but this has captured the spirit of a universally timeless moment that could be a hundred years ago, or a hundred years from now (she'll be showing it to her great-grand children).
NOTE: Subtle and judicious adjustments/refinements only.
A stab at illustrating the tweaks. Not quite where I want them, but hopefully the gist of the horse @ sharp/mass vs. her shows a little shift her way....Show more →
Kent,
Thanks for your thoughts, kind comments, and re-work. Yes, a WIP but seeing others' renditions helps - perhaps somewhere between Karen's and your versions.
Agree - critiquing another's family captures could be like walking into a minefield
Bob
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