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Archive 2014 · Costumed Station Attendant

  
 
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Costumed Station Attendant


Appreciate your thoughts...role as Organ Grinder at NL steam locomotive system railway station.

Thanks,

Bob







Jan 01, 2014 at 07:36 PM
Andre Labonte
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Costumed Station Attendant


Great shot ... but I think it would have worked better with the smoke coming out the pipe and not his mouth.


Jan 02, 2014 at 12:09 AM
Jim Rickards
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Costumed Station Attendant


Agree with Andre - some smoke is obscuring his lips.

I think a composition with him placed on the right side, rather than centered, would be even better.



Jan 02, 2014 at 01:13 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Costumed Station Attendant


Nice crisp conversion except his left eye looks a bit odd (too bright)


Jan 02, 2014 at 08:52 AM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Costumed Station Attendant


Thanks folks,

Just the type of helpful feedback I was hoping for!

Regards,

Bob



Jan 02, 2014 at 09:23 AM





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