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Pretty much what Kent has said.
I tried to download your image to show an alternate crop but the file appears damaged (and very small).
Here's what I was writing:
The die on the left certainly says motion with the spinning action well shown by the blur. The #4 die seems caught in between sharp and obvious motion. I wish it was more frozen in capture since it is facing us. Or more blurred, spinning away. Eye goes there strongly given its centering, its sharper focus, the strong shadow beneath, and the spot-light effect of lighting on and beneath.
I think a different placement in the frame and angling the two more might give a better sense of movement. Eg:
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