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p.1 #1 · My first Architectural B&W


Made an attempt to do some B&W architecture work last week. This is my first serious attempt at architecture specially in B&W.

Eager to get some feedback what can improve. (brutally critical comments welcome :-)



msoomro 2013

Reachingh the sky








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Dec 28, 2013 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #2 · My first Architectural B&W


super composition and toning. a good start for your project.
I like the angle and sky.
regards, tom



Dec 29, 2013 at 01:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · My first Architectural B&W


tomandmarj wrote:
super composition and toning. a good start for your project.
I like the angle and sky.
regards, tom


+1



Dec 29, 2013 at 01:17 AM
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p.1 #4 · My first Architectural B&W


Was the sky put in post?

I like it but I would think a bit of shadow on the right side of building might enhance it even more

Cheers

Phil



Dec 29, 2013 at 02:46 AM
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p.1 #5 · My first Architectural B&W


thanks jojomon11 and lukeb.

Sky wasn't put in post. Its straight out of the long exposure RAW. However i double processed the image. Darkened the sky and merged back to original.

Will do some shadow adjustment and see how it goes :-)

Added a second image to the post as well.

cheers
msoomro



Dec 29, 2013 at 04:06 AM
 

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p.1 #6 · My first Architectural B&W


Graphically powerful images! I lean to the first one but like both. I would have guessed a red filter would have darkened the sky without the complicated double processing? Well seen and well done.


Dec 29, 2013 at 03:08 PM
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p.1 #7 · My first Architectural B&W


That second is awesome!


Dec 29, 2013 at 04:18 PM
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p.1 #8 · My first Architectural B&W


Thanks all

@Srudy: Thanks for the red filter tip. Will try out applying in post.



Dec 29, 2013 at 08:17 PM
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p.1 #9 · My first Architectural B&W


Very nice, the second one is great.

Ryan



Dec 29, 2013 at 10:02 PM





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