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Kevin,
I think you changed the images around a bit. Bryan is talking about No. 1 as a b&w image, but for me, No. 1 is blank. He comments on four images, I only see three. but five are numbered.
No 2 is rock-solid. They've gotta love it.
No. 4, the speedlight is too hot. It should be pretty even with the ambient light, or one step hotter -- depending on what kind of look you're going for. In a shot like that, I would think you would want it no more than one step hotter. Her forehead looks pretty blown out to me.
No. 5 is a really nice shot. The blue sweater goes well with her blue eyes. The lighting and the angle you're shooting is very flattering.
I want to see more of this senior. I know you're probably not within walking distance of the Coliseum or any leaning towers, but is there any way you can get a shot that clearly shows she's in Italy?
Nice shots! You're off to a great start, much much much better than my first senior shoot.
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