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I think this one needs the "so, so, phone call" test ...
Pick up the phone and call your best friend. Start the conversation with "Man, you gotta see this. It is so , the is so ... "
At the moment, I'm a bit remiss to fill in the blanks very well, but if you know what message you would verbally tell your friend about things, then that can help to guide you how to present it. At the moment, I'm just not seeing anything that warrants me call my best friend to tell him about it (as if I'm still standing in front of it) ... i.e. no "Dude, you gotta come see this. It's so ..." or "Here's what I really want you to see."
Some interesting elements @ formal lines vs. decay, but the juxtaposition doesn't seem to carry it strongly enough for me to get it past "it's a picture of a window". Maybe if you had more specular light raking/showcasing the texture ... not sure, atm. I can see your uncertainty validated ... hmmm @ how to change that.
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