Eric Smith Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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I'll jump in.
1. Crop the top way down, and crop the right of the image tighter. Exposure looks fine (as all the rest, by the way)
2. Your horizon is tilted (a very easy fix in post), and half the ball is out of the frame. An easy "dump it."
3. The shooter is way too far away from the basket.
4. Total pass. He's moving right-to-left, you cut his legs off, and it's just an awkward frame. To be expected when he's four feet in front of you when you're shooting with (I'm assuming) a 70-200 or small tele.
5. Stock shot.
6. This needs to be cropped much, much tighter.
7. Crop the top and bottom of this one.
8. Crop the right of this frame out.
Shoot across the court, focus on defense, look for loose balls, try the benches, get a coach freaking out, look for emotion (cheers and tears), stand up and get near the post. Try getting off the floor and moving up in the arena for a different perspective next time if you can. Shoot looking at the goal, then move down to mid-court. Etc., etc., etc...
Hope this helps. Sorry, but basketball is next to impossible to bleep up, even when a ref's ass is in your frame all night. That's why you need to move around and mix things up.
Cheers!
Eric
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