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Weasel_Loader wrote:
From a recent shoot at Red Rock Canyon State Park. Used my Sony A7s with 55mm f/1.8 ZA, three Yongnuo YN-560II flashes through an umbrella and controlled with Yongnuo YN560TX on camera. Also used a 3-stop B+W ND filter to get my shutter speed down since I shot this during late morning sun.
Feedback always welcomed. Thanks.
Good morning.
Because you have asked for feedback, I will offer some:
first of all, I appreciate how you set up the lighting with the umbrella and the flashes and the neutral density filter because the lighting is spot on in both of these images.
However, in the first image the mountain range in the background which is purposely out of focus has an exaggerated chromatic aberration above, which cuts right through the neck line of your beautiful subject and is a bit distracting.
In the second image, again, the lighting is wonderful and there are two beautiful subjects. However, because of the way you've taken the picture the perspective of the young man on the right side of the image already being a larger human than the beautiful girl on the left side of the image makes it look as if he is 10 times bigger, or that she is a doll sitting on his lap.
So, the lighting is wonderful and your subjects are handsome and beautiful. My critique is with the out of focus mountain range through the neck of the girl in the first image and the angle at which you took the second image.
Again, I only offer this critique because you asked.
Thank you for telling us about your lighting set up as it worked very well.
The very best to you, always.
Greg
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