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Nice job, Birdie. I'll tell you what I see. I don't know what kind of effect you were after, but they seem to me that overall they lack a bit on sharpness especially the Focus point.
They also show some hard edges with halos around the petals, especially the first two, the second one mostly on the viewer's left side.
The third image looks the best on my monitor but I'm looking for more sharpness in the center of the flower.
Having said so I really appreciate you experimenting with new techniques. Keep trying. That's what makes us better and frees our creativity