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Nov 17, 2013 at 03:06 PM
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Her hair looks like its defying gravity because of the angle of the picture combined with her pose. It looks odd!

Her left arm looks like a strange protrusion from her back.

Not working for me I'm afraid.



Nov 17, 2013 at 04:03 PM
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I appreciate your comment. I reality it was a very strange pose, but probably not what the picture conveys. Her hair is hanging straight down towards the floor. It was the picture that was rotated when cropping. I certainly see your concerns.
Larry



Nov 17, 2013 at 04:48 PM
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Not sure about this one. While the pose is interesting, the lack of light in her eyes makes her look a bit "hard".

I do like the angle shot and what it does with the hair though. I would love to see it with a model that has either curly or wavy hair too.



Nov 17, 2013 at 05:39 PM
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ct8282 wrote:
Her hair looks like its defying gravity because of the angle of the picture combined with her pose. It looks odd!

Her left arm looks like a strange protrusion from her back.

Not working for me I'm afraid.


+1 on everything Chris said. If you shoot at an angle like that, the hair going straight like that... it just looks weird and it's hard to go anywhere past that. You just look at it and ask yourself, what's going on here?



Nov 17, 2013 at 05:42 PM
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I am one of the most unobjective judges of my own work. I need you folks to ground me. I do appreciate the feedback!
Larry



Nov 17, 2013 at 06:02 PM
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Larry,
I'm never sure how important "objective judging" is for a different kind of shot such as this.

But for such imagery- I'm strictly a layman. And I don't really care about being objective.
To me: the woman is quite beautiful. Her "look" is a bit hard- but she's sexy enough-looking to get away with it. The kind of woman I might have lusted after when I was younger- but wouldn't quite be sure what to do if I ever had the chance .
The hair at such an attention-getting angle was surprising at first, but it didn't bother me, and I quickly went on to look at all the rest of the image.

So- this layman likes the image.
Charlie



Nov 17, 2013 at 08:45 PM
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I agree on the hair problem.

The eyes in this shot are not getting light to show a catchlight.

The pose might be modified to hide the far arm or show it differently. It does look a little odd in this composition.



Nov 18, 2013 at 05:40 AM
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I like the pose and idea, the hair makes me think she is flying. The left arm though almost it look like she has a hump back. Cool idea.


Nov 18, 2013 at 01:53 PM





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