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Based on the original shot, I think the crop is ideal. Unfortunately you don't have any real estate to work with to the right, because my eyes are naturally following the direction the Topi are facing.
In terms of processing, it seems a BIT heavy-handed with the sat/vibrance and maybe a little too contrasty.
I'm also curious if this would work in BW or if it'd feel too washed out.