tonyhart Offline Upload & Sell: Off
|
Such fantastic work Alex. Hard to choose so I'm not going to be specific on losing/keeping as I think your style intent needs to take dominance over mine. A few things I would say though:
- Nothing wrong with short testimonial quotes per se, but as you've alluded to, I'd consider culling the quotes that don't have real ring to them. Keep the images, but lose the quotes. Perhaps have a quote with every third image.
- Consider placing the quotes separately from the photos. I find that I start reading the quote rather than seeing the work. If the quotes sat in between on separate blank slides then I find that much more effective. Gives the viewer something to read without competing with the images and it builds anticipation for the next bit of epicness.
- Whether you keep the quotes on the images or move them to separate slides, I'd choose a different font and not highlight/embolden certain words. The bold thing comes across as a bit heavy handed in attempting to hammer home how awesome you are. Which you are, but no need to hammer it home As for the font, obviously you're a modern photographer so I'd stay with something modern, but the font you're currently using is just so boring that it looks utterly unstylish next to the quality of the images. Try and find something with at least a touch of character.
Just some thoughts.
|