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Any thoughts/comments/ideas, good or bad. Thanks!

Nov 12, 2013 at 03:21 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Girl inside a display window

Welcome to FM and to the PC forum.

Diggin' the many juxtapositions ... nicely seen, timed and captured ... much to like, all the way down to the plaid shirt and plaid scarf.

Uptown, downtown, climbing the corporate ladder, blue/white, steadfast/hurried, facing opposite directions, etc.

A crop and conversion to BW for comparison.

Edited on Nov 12, 2013 at 04:05 PM · View previous versions

Nov 12, 2013 at 03:55 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Girl inside a display window

RustyBug wrote:
Welcome to FM and to the PC forum.

Diggin' the many juxtapositions ... nicely seen, timed and captured ... much to like.

Uptown, downtown, climbing the corporate ladder, blue/white, steadfast/hurried, facing opposite directions, etc.

A crop and conversion to BW for comparison.

Thanks!

Nov 12, 2013 at 04:05 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Girl inside a display window

I think the blur of the foreground woman is too dominant to make this juxtaposition work well.
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Nov 15, 2013 at 09:37 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Girl inside a display window

Ｉ　ｓｅｅ．

Nov 15, 2013 at 10:06 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Girl inside a display window

I like the color matching between pants and background. Good choice of subject.

I can't decide if I like the lady in the foreground. Maybe too much in the foreground?

Anyway, I would have played with the composition and enjoyed the nice colors.

edit: Did you post-process the colors?

Nov 22, 2013 at 03:38 PM


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