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I think your temp changes are pretty good. Only a subtle blue (not always a bad thing) in a few areas that are more in line with mood control rather than incorrect WB. Much to like here ... sharpening / contrast levels could be tweaked to give it a punchier vibe, or it could be left as is for the softer vibe (i.e. subjective @ individual preference).
Given the very distinct distance layers of fg, bridge/fall and distant fall, I might try to impart some selective sharpening variance to enhance those differences and generate a touch more "depth" feel to it ... but that's just something I like trying to achieve in certain images.
Really, not much to change ... except as your preferences dictate @ mood/vibe. Much goodness to like (maybe a micro-smidgeon rotation or skew to level bridge ), the comp spatial relationships are nicely balanced to transition us around with lines, tones, hues, scale and mass.
Again, much goodness.