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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Abandoned House 2


Another shot from the abandoned houses.

I'm not all that good with B+W processing, so please let me know if I've really messed anything up.

Cheers!

Jeff







Oct 31, 2013 at 03:02 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Abandoned House 2


Also - don't be afraid to let me know that the picture just isn't that interesting!


Oct 31, 2013 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Abandoned House 2


The picture doesn't have much interest for me, but everyone will see it differently. The center of the image has the faucet and the webs but they're small in relation to the overall size of the image, and the rest of the image has big areas of relative blackness. The counter on the right competes with the counter in the center, but the one of the right has nothing on it and leads the eye out of the frame.

I think I'd look at some different crops perhaps isolating the faucet more ? and lightening up the dark areas just a bit.

Just my ideas,
Keith



Oct 31, 2013 at 11:08 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Abandoned House 2


Thanks Keith - I'll see how some different crops look.


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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Abandoned House 2


documents features of the interior, but I agree with Keith: other than perhaps as part of a series it doesnt sustain much interest.
I think the processing is OK, although I would leave a hint more of shadow detail
Scott



Nov 07, 2013 at 03:12 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Abandoned House 2


I think its to contrasty..I think you need to bring up some mid tones also just enough to give a hint at what is on the left and right sides..I need to be able to see something in the shadows!


Nov 07, 2013 at 11:55 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Abandoned House 2


Scott and Jglaser - thanks for the replies!

I was kinda going for dark shadows on the outsides, playing up the primary light source through the window.

When I get home today I'll play with the cropping, shadows and contrast and see if I can come up with a more compelling look.

Otherwise I'll just let this one go!

Thanks again,

Jeff



Nov 07, 2013 at 12:26 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Abandoned House 2


Took way too long to get back to this one!

Made a few changes (couple of versions).














Dec 05, 2013 at 11:37 PM





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