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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Gavin - 7 years old


My son Gavin, 7 years old.

Critiques welcome...











Oct 30, 2013 at 05:21 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Gavin - 7 years old


I would prefer about 5 more feet of separation of Gain from the fence, great shot.


Oct 30, 2013 at 06:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Gavin - 7 years old


He is a very cute boy and I love his expression! I will be nitpicky on the critique since you asked for it. I agree with the previous poster about having more distance between him and the fence behind him. Your highlights are looking very close to being blown, especially on the upper cheek areas. He's also looking cool and magenta to me - I'd up the color temp and push the tint slider toward the green in your raw editing program. I'd also touch up the orange color cast from his shirt that is on his chin. I HTH!


Oct 30, 2013 at 09:27 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Gavin - 7 years old


Good eye Lisa.....if I shoot a portrait in landscape mode I will try to get the subject off center. this would make a good black and white as well I think.


Oct 30, 2013 at 10:54 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Gavin - 7 years old


Everything's been mentioned already. I'll just say you have a good composition. I notice the writing on the shirt is not visible/readable. A crop with it showing might be less appealing.


Oct 31, 2013 at 12:49 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Gavin - 7 years old


Thanks everyone, your comments are appreciated.


Oct 31, 2013 at 06:01 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Gavin - 7 years old


Ok, warmed it up a tad and cropped out the lettering on his shirt. Any other suggestions? My monitor is calibrated using i1Display Pro edited on my macbook pro laptop.

Thanks again for your suggestions.







Oct 31, 2013 at 02:32 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Gavin - 7 years old


it is incredible how useful were the advices, now your image looks a lot better


Nov 25, 2013 at 09:38 AM





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