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SloPhoto wants me to critique so here it goes.
I see what you are trying to do here but a lot of these shots either seem like snapshots (and not in a good way) or like they are poorly composed.
One of the big things you have to do is isolate the couple so that the subject and focus of the photo is on them. A lot of them like 1, 2, 3, 6 are really nice. When you have the couples in those situation engage them. Get them talking, talk to them, make them laugh, get them to act natural and wait for that moment. 3 is really nice but his expression is just meh. The expressions in a lot of these just don't do it for me. They are not bad or missed just not quite there.
Watch the hot spots and weird lighting as well. 8, 9, and 11 suffer from weird lighting. It is hot, hits them weird and does not flatter them. My eye is drawn to the hot spots or the dark spots and take my eye away from them.
Also what is up with the use of several different languages on your website?
Hope that helps. I feel like a bad guy when I am honest but i am just trying to help
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