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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Serengeti Scape IV


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Oct 15, 2013 at 07:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Serengeti Scape IV


good thing, Scott, that you were using the strong zoom to get tree detail!
honestly - nice tree placement and composition.
do you think more sky contrast would aid or harm the mood here??
regards, tom



Oct 15, 2013 at 09:49 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Serengeti Scape IV


Thanks Tom.
Which way would you lean? I am not entirely happy with the sky.
Scott



Oct 16, 2013 at 09:40 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Serengeti Scape IV


Very nice minimalistic approach.
I like it, Scott.
Chris



Oct 16, 2013 at 04:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Serengeti Scape IV


Thanks Chris.
Any thoughts (anyone) about the sky/contrast issue?

Scott



Oct 22, 2013 at 05:44 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Serengeti Scape IV


Hi Scott,

I like the composition, IMHO the large expanse of a dull looking sky takes away from the image. I would opt for a stronger contrasty sky.

Vic



Oct 22, 2013 at 06:14 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Serengeti Scape IV


Scott,

The dominant sky works well for me; I played a bit with burning in clouds but the net result is they become the visual focus rather than tree - sort of smothering the foreground. At least for me.

Alternatively a gradient, ~50% opacity and soft light blend might add a little kick. Then sharpen the clouds. Added a bit of contrast, reduced brightness very slightly?


Just a thought. I'll remove rework if you object.

Regards,

Bob







Oct 22, 2013 at 06:15 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Serengeti Scape IV


Both Scott and Bob did a good job
Very nice



Oct 23, 2013 at 07:01 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Serengeti Scape IV


viczig wrote:
Hi Scott,

I like the composition, IMHO the large expanse of a dull looking sky takes away from the image. I would opt for a stronger contrasty sky.

Vic


Vic,
thanks for the feedback and suggestion. I have more work to do on this one.
Scott



Nov 03, 2013 at 09:59 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Serengeti Scape IV


Bob,
thanks, but I am having a hard time seeing much difference in your re-work

Dan,
thanks for the input.

Scott



Nov 03, 2013 at 10:00 PM





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