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p.1 #1 · Serengeti Scape IV


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Oct 16, 2013 at 12:09 AM
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p.1 #2 · Serengeti Scape IV


good thing, Scott, that you were using the strong zoom to get tree detail!
honestly - nice tree placement and composition.
do you think more sky contrast would aid or harm the mood here??
regards, tom



Oct 16, 2013 at 02:49 AM
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p.1 #3 · Serengeti Scape IV


Thanks Tom.
Which way would you lean? I am not entirely happy with the sky.
Scott



Oct 16, 2013 at 02:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · Serengeti Scape IV


Very nice minimalistic approach.
I like it, Scott.
Chris



Oct 16, 2013 at 09:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · Serengeti Scape IV


Thanks Chris.
Any thoughts (anyone) about the sky/contrast issue?

Scott



Oct 22, 2013 at 10:44 PM
 

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p.1 #6 · Serengeti Scape IV


Hi Scott,

I like the composition, IMHO the large expanse of a dull looking sky takes away from the image. I would opt for a stronger contrasty sky.

Vic



Oct 22, 2013 at 11:14 PM
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p.1 #7 · Serengeti Scape IV


Scott,

The dominant sky works well for me; I played a bit with burning in clouds but the net result is they become the visual focus rather than tree - sort of smothering the foreground. At least for me.

Alternatively a gradient, ~50% opacity and soft light blend might add a little kick. Then sharpen the clouds. Added a bit of contrast, reduced brightness very slightly?


Just a thought. I'll remove rework if you object.

Regards,

Bob







Oct 22, 2013 at 11:15 PM
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p.1 #8 · Serengeti Scape IV


Both Scott and Bob did a good job
Very nice



Oct 23, 2013 at 12:01 PM
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p.1 #9 · Serengeti Scape IV


viczig wrote:
Hi Scott,

I like the composition, IMHO the large expanse of a dull looking sky takes away from the image. I would opt for a stronger contrasty sky.

Vic


Vic,
thanks for the feedback and suggestion. I have more work to do on this one.
Scott



Nov 04, 2013 at 02:59 AM
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p.1 #10 · Serengeti Scape IV


Bob,
thanks, but I am having a hard time seeing much difference in your re-work

Dan,
thanks for the input.

Scott



Nov 04, 2013 at 03:00 AM





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