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This could be my Monthly assignment entry (Theme:: Overhead), but something just seems off. What do you think?? Thank you, Jim

Based on John's suggestion I darken the bottom of the rail for that shadow effect.





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Edited on Oct 12, 2013 at 03:52 AM · View previous versions



Oct 11, 2013 at 09:38 PM
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I don't know if you have other composition angles, but it's hard for me to tell at first what it is. The wheels, bottom of the skateboard and edges of the feet are all in the same plane so it's hard to distinguish. Since it's hard to tell, the white rail just seems to be in the way.

I like the idea. You certainly have the strictly "overhead" view!



Oct 12, 2013 at 12:19 AM
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FarmerJohn wrote:
I don't know if you have other composition angles, but it's hard for me to tell at first what it is. The wheels, bottom of the skateboard and edges of the feet are all in the same plane so it's hard to distinguish. Since it's hard to tell, the white rail just seems to be in the way.

I like the idea. You certainly have the strictly "overhead" view!


Thank you. I darkened the bottom of the rail for a shadow effect. Jim



Oct 12, 2013 at 03:10 AM
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I really like it Jim. Works with the theme and a good title.
Greg



Oct 12, 2013 at 10:25 PM
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gregfixit wrote:
I really like it Jim. Works with the theme and a good title.
Greg


Thanks Greg.



Oct 13, 2013 at 06:48 AM





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