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p.1 #1 · Carrie


Just felt like getting out and doing some shooting so grabbed my step-daughter and headed out to a tunnel on a bike trail that I've been wanting to try out.

VSCO'ish processing in LR5 at her request.

Here are just a few.

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Oct 06, 2013 at 11:42 PM
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p.1 #2 · Carrie


Lovely girl and light.

I find my eye wandering towards the incredibly bright light, though

greg



Oct 07, 2013 at 01:12 AM
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p.1 #3 · Carrie



I love No. 1, but wish she would have crossed her arms or something so her hands wouldn't be cut out. These would make great marketing shots with text or logo over to the right where you have the bright area.



Oct 07, 2013 at 02:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · Carrie


Very nice except for the missing hands. Avoid cutting arms below the elbow is usually safe. A different crop would solve the problem with all of these and keep the same overall look. If you do crop tighter reduce the headroom. Even cut slightly into the hairline to keep eyes high in the frame.


Oct 07, 2013 at 07:05 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · Carrie


#2, you caught the eyes!


Oct 07, 2013 at 07:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · Carrie


nice model - good lighting


Oct 08, 2013 at 09:56 AM
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p.1 #7 · Carrie


Thanks for the thoughts everyone. Honestly, I know better when it comes to rules of composition and cutting off limbs etc.. Smacking myself in the head for that one. You are totally correct. For some reason though....I don't see it as taking away from the image all too much. Maybe because it's my step-daughter and there's a different attachment to the images because of that. I did however get others where compositionally speaking.....they are correct...like this one.








Oct 08, 2013 at 01:32 PM





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