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Oct 05, 2013 at 06:09 PM
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Not one for the "A" list ... you've got too many others that are in a different league. Kinda stinks (1/2 empty vs. 1/2 full) when you have to start culling that hard, but this is one I think you could d cull away, unless it just is a personal fav.

Might be a candidate for artistic rendering, but "as is" the lighting is so flat it just lays there.

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Oct 05, 2013 at 06:13 PM
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fair enough
need to know
and you are of course right: most of the top stuff has already been found; trolling for more
Scott



Oct 05, 2013 at 06:17 PM
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sbeme wrote:

trolling for more

Those can make nice candidates for making some creative lemonade ... without feeling like you're "ruining" anything ... play time.








Oct 05, 2013 at 06:19 PM
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To my eyes, it would be better if the subject looked into the bulk of the negative space.







Oct 05, 2013 at 10:46 PM
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thanks guys.
Guess just not much here.

Scott



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Scott,

Try combining Kent and Aunti's ideas into one - B&W (cause man it makes that elephant's textured skin pop) and cropped tighter with the phant looking into the negative space.



Nov 06, 2013 at 02:27 PM
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AuntiPode wrote:
To my eyes, it would be better if the subject looked into the bulk of the negative space.


prefer this one, most of all!..but i think the sky is a little too bright!! can you bring it down a bit,, make it BW, but not as contrasty as the other BW on here and no angles!!



Nov 07, 2013 at 11:59 AM
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Nov 07, 2013 at 10:56 PM
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AuntiPode wrote:


yes,,just remove the out of focus grass in foreground a bit,,just about an inch,,but thats my taste and although its not distracting at all i don't think it adds,,very dramatic feel to image now



Nov 08, 2013 at 12:23 AM
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I really like it this way!
Keith



Nov 08, 2013 at 08:38 PM





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