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lhryshko wrote:
Since Paulthelefty did such a great job in critiquing a previous volleyball post (but is now taking the easy way out), I will try to give you the same quality of constructive critique from a volleyball perspective. Harsh, but well intended.
1. Looks like a jump serve but could be a back row hit. Good timing but uncertain action.
2. Almost the same. That is, no context (baseline, net, other players, etc.).
3. Much too late.
4. Great timing, icky background.
5. An awkward looking pass, not a flattering expression. A very well timed delete.
6. Nice timing but where is she?
7. Winner, winner, chicken dinner.
Lastly, if these are for sales, you can ignore everything that I said. But for pure volleyball aesthetics, only #7 works.
Larry
P.S. I hate shooting volleyball and wish I could do it as well as you....Show more →
Larry, appreciate the harsh C&C, always helps the learning curve, this is not a sport I shoot very often.
cheers,
Chris
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