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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Shared a wedding the other day for the first time and I'm finding the critiques really helpful. Figure I'll start sharing more.. So here's my first E-session post.

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Sep 26, 2013 at 11:23 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


overall really nice and fun. some green is creeping into the skin tones sometimes...
also watch her legs... in some of the ones where their are lit up high her legs go dark and kinda orange/red a little more than looks natural.

they will be happy for sure!



Sep 26, 2013 at 10:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Solid set. A bit too tilty for me, but thats a style preference. Also I'd prefer 7 didn't have part of the foot cut off. Hard to fault these though. They should be happy with them. The heavy dodge and burn on the last one seems a bit too noticable IMHO. Also for silhouettes a personal preference is to have them completely dark, you see a bit too much in them in 4, but yet not enough if you aren't going for a full silhouette.


Sep 26, 2013 at 11:11 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Those greens seem far too strong in the initial pictures. Overall a nice set though.


Sep 27, 2013 at 05:42 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Nice set, you have some really nice images here. On #7 soemething crazy is going on o his legs and you cut off his foot. I love #21, I wish she was leaning on him, but still great image.


Sep 27, 2013 at 07:48 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


If that's a scab on her knee in #6 I'd clone it out. (If she has skinned knees I want to know why, haha! Tom boy?) Agree with the green skin tones. Otherwise a nice engagement session.


Sep 27, 2013 at 07:56 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Mitch W wrote:
If that's a scab on her knee in #6 I'd clone it out. (If she has skinned knees I want to know why, haha! Tom boy?) Agree with the green skin tones. Otherwise a nice engagement session.


Tom boy for sure! Three days before the session she called and said she had been in an atv accident and that she had road rash on her face! She said it was almost healed though and that she was able to have a makeup artist cover what remained. Thankfully, When she showed up I couldn't tell at all.

I'll get rid of the scab Thanks!



Sep 27, 2013 at 08:59 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


sgtbueno wrote:
Nice set, you have some really nice images here. On #7 something crazy is going on o his legs and you cut off his foot. I love #21, I wish she was leaning on him, but still great image.


Hey thanks!

On 7 I think its some of the foreground blurred out that is making his legs look funky..You're right though that does look weird

And his feet...I cut it off in camera accidentally. I think I might have one with his feet in that I can give them, but the expression was better in this one.

On 21 I wish his shirt hadn't come un-tucked..Just noticed that!

Thanks for the comments!



Sep 27, 2013 at 09:11 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Dustin!
Stoked to see you on here.

I love the pics, love the colors, the happiness.
The only things I'd say are that there seem to be a lot of center comps and the camera to subject distance is relatively the same. If I look at my photos it's probably the same but that's what I felt as I was looking through them

Shane(from the San Fran workshop)



Sep 27, 2013 at 01:53 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


ShaneMD wrote:
Dustin!
Stoked to see you on here.

I love the pics, love the colors, the happiness.
The only things I'd say are that there seem to be a lot of center comps and the camera to subject distance is relatively the same. If I look at my photos it's probably the same but that's what I felt as I was looking through them

Shane(from the San Fran workshop)


Thanks Shane!

There is a lot of center comps isn't there. I had to laugh a little because I normally have a tendency put my subjects to the right or left and forget about center comps altogether! My last couple sessions I have been making it a point to shoot more center comps.. I know I need to get better at mixing it up for sure!

And the distance thing I agree with 100%. I'll work on it

Thanks again for the comments. Hope your doing well!





Sep 27, 2013 at 02:14 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


Hey, great set man, don't mind centered composition- kinda works here, great pp and colours, but most important- connection between the couple is obvious
Good job.



Oct 02, 2013 at 08:27 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Nebraska Engagement (21 Images)


looks very Hoffer-esque


Oct 02, 2013 at 05:31 PM





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