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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Moss Glen Falls


Moss Glen Falls near Granville, Vermont, in a drizzle and after days of rain. I find moving water a tough subject in part because I have yet to find a magic formula that works for any waterfall (!) and because the degree of blurring of the water is such a matter of taste. I sort of like this image, but I welcome any ideas/suggestions for improving it.

Thanks for looking!
Keith


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Sep 25, 2013 at 12:51 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Moss Glen Falls


I like the amount of water blur in this one. And I like the color of the water @ very neutral. I might consider cropping a little bit from the bottom to rebalance the weighting of the foreground vs. the waterfall ... giving the waterfall a touch more prominence. Maybe some crop of the right side, but that's a The "little fall" in the llc is a nice touch on the composition.


Sep 25, 2013 at 01:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Moss Glen Falls


I like the look of the water. You did a good job with the shutter speed. I might try a 4x5 crop to see if you can raise the prominence of the waterfall.


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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Moss Glen Falls


Thanks Rusty and john. Here's a re-crop as suggested:


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Sep 25, 2013 at 08:00 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Moss Glen Falls


That looks better. I would dodge the yellow rock on the right; I think it is a little distracting. I would burn the small fall on the left to get a call and response in your image.


Sep 25, 2013 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Moss Glen Falls


I definitely like the re-crop a lot more. I think I would even crop tighter on the right to get rid of the bright rocks and also make the view go more strongly from upper right to lower left.


Oct 01, 2013 at 04:52 AM





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