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p.1 #1 · Storm clouds over the Tetons


This image came from one of those driving down the road and someone yells "stop!" experiences. The someone was me, when I saw this scene. Question is, do the silhouettes work? I can brighten the foreground a bit but it gets very noisy. I liked the rays and the lone tree in front of the bright lake, and of course the skyline. Does it work?

This is pretty much SOOC, but I changed the horizon slightly to level the lake. This makes the left side seem to slope down, which I think it does in reality, but it seemed like the lake should look level.

Comments welcome and solicited! :-(


Thanks!



Jenny Lake by beanp, on Flickr

Keith



Sep 23, 2013 at 12:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · Storm clouds over the Tetons


If you cannot lighten the foreground, I would crop out most of it. In addition to the god's rays, the silhouette of the tree is very nice.


Sep 23, 2013 at 01:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Storm clouds over the Tetons


Thanks CamperJim. Per your suggestion, here's more of a pano look. I think I like it better -- less dead space all around.


CX0A5826 by beanp, on Flickr

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Sep 23, 2013 at 02:06 AM





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