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| p.1 #9 · A small article I wrote about trash the dress sessions |
They're not really wedding photos if it's not at the wedding. This is more like a bridal session, + groom, scheduled for after the wedding so folks are less harried.
Your photos are great, but you could use some more proofreading. In particular, your section titled What things to consider if you do a day after or trash session? threw me off a bit. (To where I was more distracted by the wording than amazed by the photos).
The parenthetical asides with "lol.)" in them seem awkward, and I'm not sure I'd use this phrase: Shit, at the end of every session Iím pretty certain Iím more dirty that you are and I wear my clothes many times over.haha
You may be targeting a particular type of client who would find that funny, but I think for most people the language at the beginning plus the implication that your work clothes are just as important as her dress would combine to be a bit offsetting. I think you can stress the idea that it's ok to get the dress dirty without going quite so over the top as to make it sound like the dress isn't important at all.
Like I said, the photos are amazing. I think this page might be strengthened by an occasional caption or reference to the photos, because they're very good and I wish I knew more about them.