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Getting back to my roots...

Working with the lovely April Berry and talented make up artist and hair stylist Wynete Tyree. I had a blast shooting for tallyns.com and for Bowens lights and accessories.







J T
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Sep 07, 2013 at 12:03 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · April in lingerie


She's lovely and you did a great capture. It took my eyes, however, a while to see where her bottom and leg actually were. I think it was because there is so little color separation between the lingerie and the background.


Sep 07, 2013 at 01:28 AM
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BauerPower wrote:
She's lovely and you did a great capture. It took my eyes, however, a while to see where her bottom and leg actually were. I think it was because there is so little color separation between the lingerie and the background.


Depending on each monitor's calibration points and contrast, will depend on how much separation you will see. I did want more and the rim light just missed the angle of incidence on her bum.

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.

J T




Sep 07, 2013 at 02:02 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · April in lingerie


A lovely girl and a good shot. PP is also nice. But I agree with "BauerPower" comments about the "color separation between the lingerie and the background".


Sep 07, 2013 at 04:42 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · April in lingerie


jtsmith wrote:
Depending on each monitor's calibration points and contrast, will depend on how much separation you will see. I did want more and the rim light just missed the angle of incidence on her bum.

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.

J T


On my laptop which is calibrated separation is fine and I see no issue, if I was to view it on my main comp which is also calibrated I'm sure it would be even better.

By the way she's super hot and great shot.

Regards
BUd



Sep 07, 2013 at 02:25 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · April in lingerie


my eyes had zero trouble adjusting


Sep 07, 2013 at 03:54 PM
 



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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · April in lingerie


Great shot. I'd like to see the stray hair on her shoulder removed.


Sep 07, 2013 at 04:20 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · April in lingerie


I like it. Nice lighting, great looking model. Crop is a little off for me (esp. top of the head) but I know sometimes everything is right except how I composed in-camera.


Sep 08, 2013 at 10:01 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · April in lingerie


Great lighting and nice composition (perhaps a tad too tight).


Sep 09, 2013 at 05:01 AM
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Very interesting hearing comments and critiques from different communities. I appreciate hearing different views here and it is why I come here. It is also interesting to see comments when someone else points to something and then we all agree to that when it smacks upside the head. ;-)

The shot is not for portrait rules and in general I will shoot my shots tight.

I think the stroked border tightens it up even more. The shot was used in a banner ad and it worked for that with added text in strategic places.

J T



Sep 09, 2013 at 05:15 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · April in lingerie


I had trouble with separation also. I couldn't make out what was going on with her hips/legs until I took a really close look.


Sep 09, 2013 at 02:05 PM





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