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Took my neighbors daughter out for a few snaps .

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Cristina o-580-Edit by mannyher1, on Flickr

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Cristina o-295 by mannyher1, on Flickr



Sep 06, 2013 at 07:11 PM
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Pretty lady, sweet smile....good looks


Sep 06, 2013 at 07:16 PM
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Love them both! One suggestion on the second one is to turn her slightly so you can see the rest of her body, otherwise it's like a major part of her body is missing. Just my thoughts. But gorgeous shots!



Sep 06, 2013 at 07:17 PM
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friscoron wrote:
Love them both! One suggestion on the second one is to turn her slightly so you can see the rest of her body, otherwise it's like a major part of her body is missing. Just my thoughts. But gorgeous shots!



Thank you, and you are absolutely correct . I'm rather new to all of this but will keep that in mind next time I do something like this



Sep 07, 2013 at 12:42 AM
 



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manny1967 wrote:
Thank you, and you are absolutely correct . I'm rather new to all of this but will keep that in mind next time I do something like this


Really nice shots and what a beautiful girl, Manny. Related to Ron's comments on the second, while the background bokeh is lovely, to my eye it doesnít add much to the image. Iíd be inclined to crop something like this. Hope you donít mind the example. If so please let me know and Iíll remove it.

Best,

Chuck


Edit: I should have centered her face a bit more to the left... didn't notice until I'd posted it.








Sep 07, 2013 at 02:48 AM
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nolaguy wrote:
Really nice shots and what a beautiful girl, Manny. Related to Ron's comments on the second, while the background bokeh is lovely, to my eye it doesnít add much to the image. Iíd be inclined to crop something like this. Hope you donít mind the example. If so please let me know and Iíll remove it.

Best,

Chuck

Edit: I should have centered her face a bit more to the left... didn't notice until I'd posted it.




Chuck , not offended at all . I really like your crop . Like I said I'm very new to this so any suggestions or ideas are very welcome . Thanks for taking the time to look and comment .



Sep 07, 2013 at 04:38 AM
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Two very little "nits" on the 2nd photo.

If she's wearing two earrings I'd make sure I could see both of them ... and her fingers on the hat brim merge with the flower and I'd move her finger's just a little toward the center to give some separation.



Sep 07, 2013 at 05:13 AM
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The first looks like her lips are really chapped, maybe some localized smoothing is in order.
Douglas



Sep 07, 2013 at 11:22 AM





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