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I might consider cropping to the top edge of your name. The bright tonal value at the bottom edge draws a bit. The foreground grasses overall compete pretty hard as well. I might look at ways to pull them back (blur,desat, tone, etc.) so they don't try to steal the show.
Comes across very much as an "as seen" @ what I would expect if I were standing there ... just wish there wasn't so much specular highlight coming off the foreground grasses.
Thanks Kent. Appreciate the thoughtfulness of your analysis.
Do you mean cropping the first version or the second version above the signature?