Ian Boys Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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Briefly,
Overall 6/10
Overall pluses: in focus, OK backgrounds, OK exposure, some nice shots, nice variety in clients
Overall minuses: use longer focal lengths, attention to detail, not just one person per photo, not just small age range.
Per photo:
#1 Keep 7/10
#2 Unsure, shadows, background 4/10
#3 Ditch because of lack of connection to viewer but other things better 4/10
#4 Hell No. Bored and boring 1/10
#5 Ditch, Has some good things going for it but lack of expression kills it 2/10
#6 Keep, good shot, needs bit more space under chin but nice 8/10
#7 Keep but not keen on polehead or armpits 7/10
#8 Keep, lovely shot, get rid of single hair over eyes and cover hole in hair 8/10
#9 Keep. No connection but good light/feel 7/10
#10 Ditch - wedding hat and smile don't match grafitti/filthy background 3/10
#11 Keep - clone out distractions on left 6/10
#12 Keep until you do a better beach shot 6/10
#13 Hell no. Grumpy is not sultry. 1/10
Hope that helps.
Light, pose, clothes, expression, background all have to match.
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