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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


Requesting your feedback, opinions, areas to improve.

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Aug 16, 2013 at 04:15 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


You need to find a better looking couple.


Aug 16, 2013 at 04:24 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


Robin Usagani wrote:
You need to find a better looking couple.


will do.



Aug 16, 2013 at 09:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


Couple look very comfortable like they are having a good time. Well done for that. Some of the crops are a bit tight #3 and #14, for example. #10 he looks too feminine and would want to see more of her face. That one doesn't really work for me. I like 12, 13 and 14. His hand in 2 is weird and very tight crop on feet. Just some thoughts as I look at them.


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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


scot1 wrote:
Couple look very comfortable like they are having a good time. Well done for that. Some of the crops are a bit tight #3 and #14, for example. #10 he looks too feminine and would want to see more of her face. That one doesn't really work for me. I like 12, 13 and 14. His hand in 2 is weird and very tight crop on feet. Just some thoughts as I look at them.


Scot,
Thank you. #3 i have a wider view also...will look into that. #14 got tight as i leveled it. I do have where she is looking out more.

Thank you for the comprehensive feedback



Aug 19, 2013 at 03:52 PM
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Yeah the full set looks too tight for me, well except #10.

That is tight!

Yeah, shit play with words but that is nice comp.

#2 would be a LOT better with some space at the bottom (I would clone it in if I was you) and a bit post work pop.

Cheers
BK



Aug 19, 2013 at 04:57 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


i think they look happy and comfortable which is really important in portraiture. they look fairly natural, but a little bit on the playful side for the most part but only a handful of images where it feels more like romance (which may not be important for everyone). processing looks fine and clean.

that said, i think you could have done more with composition and framing. you started to expand a bit with 11 and 12, but aside from those two, most of the photos are cropped fairly tight with the subject dead center, leaving the image fairly uninteresting for anyone but the couple (and their friends).



Aug 19, 2013 at 07:03 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Engagement session #2 C&C requested.


BKphotography wrote:
Yeah the full set looks too tight for me, well except #10.

That is tight!

Yeah, shit play with words but that is nice comp.

#2 would be a LOT better with some space at the bottom (I would clone it in if I was you) and a bit post work pop.

Cheers
BK


BK,
Thanks for the feedback. will keep that in mind. Perhaps different crops.



Aug 20, 2013 at 07:44 PM





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