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Barbara,
I am eager to learn as well, and anticipate Karen's usual thoughtful and deft critique and rework. Portraiture was her specialty.
From a much more amateur view,
First, great capture! I cant imagine they dont love this image. The timing, interaction, expressions, pose....all came together beautifully. It makes me smile. The warmth of the moment is infectious!
Second, processing. What did they think? Is this consistent with the style they previously enjoyed and are expecting? It looks technically well-executed with excellent control of the whites and, to my eye the color temp/balance looks right. Personally, I would deepen the blacks for a bit more contrast and depth, but it is a stylistic choice. Background appears relatively desaturated for a quiet look, again a stylistic decision that I am assuming they like. Is there something about the processing you are not pleased with?
Scott
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