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I'm sorry but these are just not working.
First I would have had her wearing her kit and do the shoot that way, I would have liked a few more serious facial expressions from her instead of the smile.
As other mentioned Wb is all over the shop, pick one and stick with it for the entire shoot.
The lighting on her is way too harsh and why are you shooting at such small apertures? By the focal length it looks like you were maybe shooting with a 70-200mm f2.8, I would have shot it at f3.5 to f4. Did you light it with a bare flash? I just think it needs to be softer on her.
5 is the only one I would keep but I would tone down the bright lockers where the flash has hit it, ideally you would want the flash light to fall off quickly and not spill on the background.
Sorry to be blunt but these could have been much better.
Regards
Bud
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