Tony Hoffer Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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There are some really high-level images here. I think your processing fits the mood and style of this wedding and WOW that bride is a knockout! With the quality (good) and amount (small) of images I couldn't really draw any overall conclusions about your work, but here's a few thoughts on individual images:
On this one, I can only tell who the subject is because she's wearing white. The expressions look nice, but it's a bit of a mess compositionally. There's no foreground, background, subject, supporting people, ect... Just have a little more guts next time and get closer to them...
http://jamello.smugmug.com/Weddings/Wedding10/i-3p6t9FF/1/XL/WHY_6720-XL.jpg
This shot is fine, but not as good as many of the others... It's a good moment, but there's nothing that sets it apart. It's shot from a normal standing perspective and I guess I feel like it just includes too much. More than that though, I have a huge pet peeve for seeing flashes in the shot. Just a preference of mine:
http://jamello.smugmug.com/Weddings/Wedding10/i-kg5LzR5/1/XL/WHY_6817-XL.jpg
This is the type of shot that this woman's grandkids will see in 50 years and brag about how gorgeous their grandma was. Nice job!
http://jamello.smugmug.com/Weddings/Wedding10/i-Jh6JM6G/1/XL/WY2_0592-XL.jpg
This is really cool to me. The only slight improvement, is I would have waited for a subject in the background (bridesmaids) that were moving a little faster than this. It's a small thing, but I think it would give a little more action and anticipation:
http://jamello.smugmug.com/Weddings/Wedding10/i-KMVHvgs/2/XL/WHY_6398-XL.jpg
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