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Scott,
Overall, I was kinda surprised by the original. The transformation from snap to port is a nice take on things. You might want to go back through on your brushwork as there are some spots / edges that are a bit rough in a few places. No easy feat to bring it to this point, but there are a few places that could use some additional attention before taking to print. I might consider a radial gradient/vignette/blur to transition/emulate some falloff between the edges @ subject to the bg
Nice job on capturing the pensive mood.
While not a flattering port, per se ... here's something to reflect what she might be thinking/feeling @ isolated/different from the other women and wondering if she is destined to become just like them?
Many different vibes you could put to it with hue/tonal variations. This is one that I could see being a historical reflection about 30 & 50 years from now as she is then sitting in one of the other chairs and seeing her daughter / grand-daughter with a similar pensive look.
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