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Bob Jarman
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All thoughts and comments appreciated.

Thanks for looking,

Bob











Edited on Aug 04, 2013 at 09:43 AM · View previous versions



Aug 02, 2013 at 05:14 PM
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Hi Bob,
Composition, processing etc all very good.

What makes this stand out for me is the serious expression on the young boys face, instead of smiling or laughing as kids usually do when they are in for a swim

Cheers Ray



Aug 02, 2013 at 05:24 PM
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Dougo wrote:
Hi Bob,
Composition, processing etc all very good.

What makes this stand out for me is the serious expression on the young boys face, instead of smiling or laughing as kids usually do when they are in for a swim

Cheers Ray


Thanks Ray,

Could be that he doesn't quite trust me as earlier I jumped in fully clothed after chasing him. "With his shoes on!" (And I'd spent 5 hours rebuilding a garden retaining wall.)

They return to the NL next week...

Regards,

Bob



Aug 02, 2013 at 07:14 PM
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Bob, I think the slight vig distracts passively IMO

Nice light grey tones here Sir

Phil



Aug 02, 2013 at 10:36 PM
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jojomon11 wrote:
Bob, I think the slight vig distracts passively IMO

Nice light grey tones here Sir

Phil


Phil,

Thank you for your observation. I must reconsider and become less a creature of habit

Regards,

Bob



Aug 03, 2013 at 07:11 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Asymmetric portrait - less vignette


I was drawn in by the expressions of these handsome children, and did not notice the vignettes til later, but I do think you could soften the vignettes a bit.


Aug 04, 2013 at 08:47 AM
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sans vignette..

Bob












Aug 04, 2013 at 09:42 AM





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