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p.1 #1 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Met this beautiful couple today, C&C welcomed! Thank you for your time guys



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Jul 31, 2013 at 05:21 AM
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p.1 #2 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


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Jul 31, 2013 at 05:22 AM
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p.1 #3 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


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Jul 31, 2013 at 05:24 AM
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p.1 #4 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


last one!

p.s. btw how can i upload more than 5 pictures in one post?



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Jul 31, 2013 at 05:24 AM
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p.1 #5 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


I like your wide perspectives. So many people don't mix up their views.

I'm not as much of a fan of when you cut off around the knees though. Also you post a few of the same spot with minor differences, I think its stronger to show more confidence and select one stand out image for a particular spot.

Oh, and having numbers to your images helps in providing comments to each image.



Jul 31, 2013 at 07:18 AM
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p.1 #6 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Great set, where is that blue wall located? Still in the dumbo area? Love it.


Jul 31, 2013 at 11:47 AM
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p.1 #7 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Outstanding job. Congrats!


Jul 31, 2013 at 02:10 PM
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p.1 #8 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


I like the set, fun couple- looks like you were having great time together. Well done.
As for uploading more than 5 pictures- you just copy the url adress of a picture- from your blog/site for instance- directly into post here on fm, and the picture will appear.
Good job- keep on posting



Jul 31, 2013 at 03:22 PM
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p.1 #9 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


@steve thanks for your advice on numbering the pictures.
@wnstudio thanks for that tip and really appreciate that u like my set
@Njphotostudio Thank you!
@Photosymbol yea it is still in dumbo. it nearby the big arch.



Jul 31, 2013 at 03:34 PM
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p.1 #10 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


she's a stunner.

The images look fine. I like your B&W conversion a lot.

Some quick & dirty C&C from me..

- the processing is a bit heavy handed, which might just be a style thing. But the dodging on #1 and the blue/orange wall thing sticks out.

- The dude's nose is pretty prominent, and when you are doing a kissing shot you need to watch out for it. I think a 'let go of the kiss a little bit' shot would be more flattering for them.

- The shot of the bride sitting and the groom standing.. I kinda wish it's the other way around. Then you can play around with the girl's poses.

- The really nice close up shot of the girl with her ring visible - that could have bee improved if the guy didn't just stand there.. that seems like an unnatural to me. I mean, you got this gorgeous girl in front of you... surely there's something you can do with your hand other than just dropping it to the side like that?

Thanks for sharing!



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p.1 #11 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


@widjayaman thank you so much for C&C, frankly you are on point, and I will def. try to avoid/improve when i'm faced with same/similar situations. Thank you!


Jul 31, 2013 at 08:04 PM
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p.1 #12 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


nice mix of images - and I agree, looks like a fun couple



Aug 01, 2013 at 04:53 PM
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p.1 #13 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Post 2 pic #3 is a great capture of her. She looks very beautiful! Well done.


Aug 02, 2013 at 01:44 AM
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p.1 #14 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


The shot with the blue wall and blue sky is my favorite.


Aug 12, 2013 at 10:39 PM
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p.1 #15 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Really nice set. I like that their connection was captured throughout. Kudos for making them so comfortable.



Aug 12, 2013 at 11:22 PM
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p.1 #16 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


@CW100, Tyler2106, tobicus, tdurnan

- Thank you so much for taking your time to write me a comment, I really appreciate it.



Aug 13, 2013 at 08:39 PM
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p.1 #17 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Absolutely love the images, especially the one with the blue wall. It's perfect for a wedding invite, save the date or even as a photo thank you card, if they wanted to. Good stuff


Aug 16, 2013 at 07:58 AM
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p.1 #18 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


I love the couple, your ideas behind all the shots and your processing is great (for me). I do have a couple of comments.

1. Number your images, it makes for easier critique

2. I would disagree with what another person said in that they like the connection between the couple. I think she carries the set and the overall personality in the images. It isn't until the 4th from last shot that I really get a felling that he's into her. I say that because in most shots (except for the first two) the isn't even touching her. Like the shots where she is backed up to the wall and he is kissing her (the color and b/w), I see that and I'm totally wanting him to be grabbing her waist and pulling her in. My 2 cents.

I really like the set, good job

Jason



Aug 19, 2013 at 01:27 AM
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p.1 #19 · Engagement Session at DUMBO NYC (16 images)


Great stuff here. I love DUMBO, and that area of Brooklyn in general.

Like others asked, if you'd like more specific feedback, it's helpful to number your images.



Aug 19, 2013 at 06:18 AM





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