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Archive 2013 · Twiga (III)

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Twiga (III)


could use a title as well as feedback of the usual sort

Scott



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Jul 29, 2013 at 07:20 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Twiga (III)


Perhaps trim some from the top to tighten the compo.


Jul 29, 2013 at 08:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Twiga (III)


AuntiPode wrote:
Perhaps trim some from the top to tighten the compo.


+1 ... just below the trunk/base of the tree/bush.

Also, you might take the zebra ear (white spot) just right of the giraffe and clone it (1/2 ) into grass for just a touch more separation.

This is very nice in terms of an interplay of symmetries ... diggin the timing/precision/comp of the shot. One of those shots where adjustments of inches/millimeters matter to get things to line up & balance, just so.



Jul 29, 2013 at 08:18 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Twiga (III)


Nicely seen and captured.


Jul 29, 2013 at 11:26 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Twiga (III)


Loads of potential here.
great shot.

For me I'd look at a square crop (building a little extra space left and right if I needed to) and then a slight reengineering of the lighting to emphasise the seperate planes of interest.

Abstract title sugestion: 'T in the park'



Jul 30, 2013 at 09:41 AM





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