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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Trip to the Farmers' Market - capture added | |
I was at the local farmer's market this morning with my wife and we were both oohing and ahing at this season's bounty of produce while stocking up ourselves on seasonal fruits and vegetables. The colors and smells and tastes are simply incredible this time of year. All in all, photographically great subject matter for still lifes.
I like the juxtaposition of the vegetable basket with organic shapes and forms juxtaposed against the stark geometry of the tiles. However, as far as how your compostion works, the criss cross lines between the tiles make it appear as if the right side of the photo is dropping off. They also take your eye and interest toward the right and rear of the photo, rather than staying focused on that beautiful basket of vegetables. The fact that the right side of the photo is also the brightest area, also causes your eye to travel in that direction.
Maybe slightly darken the tiles on the right for starters, or crop to a different perspective? Or reshoot and have those leading lines converging on the vegetable basket.
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