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p.1 #1 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Congratulations to Dawei Ye for winning Feature Thread of the Week with 8 votes - View Previous Winners


Please feel free to be brutal with C&C!

[Edit: 26/8/13 - Replacement Image due to broken link]






FF 85mm @f/1.2, ISO 100, 1/125

Edited on Aug 26, 2013 at 11:17 AM · View previous versions



Jul 25, 2013 at 03:54 PM
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p.1 #2 · NSFW: Getting Ready


lovely shot. I might soften it, slightly, for the album.



Jul 25, 2013 at 04:18 PM
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p.1 #3 · NSFW: Getting Ready


vagina arm-folds. Otherwise perfection.


Jul 25, 2013 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Two thumbs up!


Jul 25, 2013 at 04:36 PM
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p.1 #5 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Ok, my jaw dropped when I saw her face, then Jeremy drops his female-body-parts line and now I can't look at her image. Gee, thanks Jeremy
The lines can be lightened or even cloned out. Nice image, OP! More from the shoot? She is a beauty -- nice job.



Jul 25, 2013 at 06:00 PM
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p.1 #6 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Definitely a keeper. Oh, and it's also a nice image with great light.


Jul 25, 2013 at 06:32 PM
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p.1 #7 · NSFW: Getting Ready


daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayuuuuuuuuuuuum girl.


Jul 25, 2013 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · NSFW: Getting Ready


I think it's a really nicely done image. The tone is good on it. The one critique that I would make involves her hip. I would either hide it entirely or reveal a bit more of it. As is, I think the hip protrudes at a level that makes her look a bit bigger. I think you could've turned her away from the light a bit more. It would have shown a little more skin and a little less dress. I think that would've been a sexier image and would have been a bit more flattering for her by showing her from an angle where she's a little thinner.

Overall though it's really well done. I'm sure she (and her husband) love it!



Jul 25, 2013 at 10:00 PM
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p.1 #9 · NSFW: Getting Ready


My money is that it's a model and not an actual bridal. ANy takers?


Jul 25, 2013 at 10:01 PM
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p.1 #10 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Beautiful model. Be nice to see more pics of her.

I do agree with the hip though. It needs to be shown more or needs to be hidden all together. TFS



Jul 25, 2013 at 11:45 PM
 



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p.1 #11 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Beautiful model and nice captures.


Jul 26, 2013 at 01:12 AM
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p.1 #12 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Great shot, besides the armpits, but that was already mentioned. Great lighting. Window lighting?


Jul 26, 2013 at 04:04 AM
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p.1 #13 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Thanks for the feedback guys! Will work on the hip and armpit issues thanks!!!

jeremy_clay wrote:
My money is that it's a model and not an actual bridal. ANy takers?


Hi Jeremy yeah this was a model - good guess!

gome1122 wrote:
Great shot, besides the armpits, but that was already mentioned. Great lighting. Window lighting?


Yep window lighting slightly diffused by a translucent curtain! (Rainy/overcast day around noon)



Jul 26, 2013 at 04:45 AM
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p.1 #14 · NSFW: Getting Ready




jeremy_clay wrote:
My money is that it's a model and not an actual bridal. ANy takers?


Hi Jeremy yeah this was a model - good guess!




Pssssh who's guessing?



Jul 26, 2013 at 11:37 AM
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p.1 #15 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Well done in this one. I like the light and her expression.
As for the hip showing, I think you got it right. Showing a bit of the hip reinforces that she is holding the dress in front of her and she's wearing nothing behind it. You don't need to see any more than that.
On one hand, the band of light (curtain?) is a tad distracting, but on the other hand is places her next to the window - a good thing.



Jul 27, 2013 at 05:10 AM
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p.1 #16 · NSFW: Getting Ready


It works for me. Beautiful model, great light and composition. Very nice.


Jul 27, 2013 at 01:43 PM
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p.1 #17 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Ain't it amazing the number of good shots we see here that are made with window light?

And this is another one!


Ed



Jul 27, 2013 at 02:32 PM
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p.1 #18 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Beautiful model. Excellent shot. Arm creases? Big deal


Jul 28, 2013 at 11:34 PM
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p.1 #19 · NSFW: Getting Ready


Great expression. Well captured!


Aug 03, 2013 at 04:17 AM
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p.1 #20 · NSFW: Getting Ready


wow...just wow...


Aug 04, 2013 at 11:25 PM
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