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Jeff Simpson
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


Hey folks. recent engagement shoot around the DC Navy Yard and various other locations. We got about 1 hour in then got stuck in a nasty thunderstorm. as always critiques & comments are appreciated!

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Jul 24, 2013 at 08:54 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


Great composition. Is your monitor calibrated? The first few are coming across hot and a bit magenta. And the towards the second half, they have some heavy sharpening.

Great set overall, just minor tweaks in my opinion.



Jul 24, 2013 at 09:52 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


I would get rid of 2,6,7 and 12. A lot of sameness. Overall, I think they are fine. I'm not a huge fan of flash when there is available light and the camera is stopped down. Maybe a little more diversity, I'm guilty of it too.


Jul 24, 2013 at 10:25 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


Good set but I definitely think there is room for more variety. Also, I'm not sure if it your processing or because of flash but they look way too orange in most of these.


Jul 24, 2013 at 05:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


The natural light ones towards the end are WAY better than any of the deep DOF flashed shots at the beginning.


Jul 24, 2013 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


Love the ending photos! His dress attire in the beginning is well you know........


Jul 24, 2013 at 07:30 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


Wow I grew up coming here... My parents were in the navy band. It looks so different! Nice use of the space.


Jul 25, 2013 at 01:23 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · DC Navy Yard Engagement


thanks all! I obviously was looking for some solid c&c on this particular shoot and definitely got it. I'll be fixing the orange tones a bit and will remove a few to make it a stronger set. as for the variety, totally agree, however they were very partial to the bridge and we only shot for about an hour before the storm.

photosymbol: all have same sharpening, which ones are you referring to?



Jul 25, 2013 at 07:26 AM





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